I wanna write a recommended letter as wella as a work certificate. please read & advise:
To whom it may concern,
PLV is a construction materials supplier. We are experienced and qualified in all type of construction materials, and we supply them throughout the worldwide.
In Jan 07, our company had set up a temporary office in Malaysia. Unfortunately, after five months of running our business there, we found that Malaysia is not a competitive - source that met by the company鈥檚 requirements. Consequently, we have to stop the entire project and move to some other neighbor sources instead.
On behalf PLV, I here by, certify that Mr. Abdulah had been employed by our company as a Gen/Manager in our office in Hedura, Malaysia. And he had started his work in our company from 1st Jan,07 to 25th Apr,07. In recognition for his outstanding participations in our company鈥檚 projection, I strongly recommend him to apply all type of works in his specification.
Regards,
Mohamud Oma To whom it may concern,
PLV is a supplier of construction materials. We have a vast experience in this field and are qualified in all types of construction materials. We currently supply to companies all over the world.
In Jan 07, our company set up a temporary office in Malaysia. Unfortunately, after five months of running our business there, we found that Malaysia did reach our company requirements. Consequently, we have to stop the entire project and move to some other neighbouring sources instead.
On behalf of PLV, I hereby certify that Mr. Abdulah has been employed by our company as a Manager in our office in Hedura, Malaysia. He began his employment with our company on 1st Jan 2007 and finished on 25th Apr 2007. In recognition for his outstanding participation in our company鈥檚 projection, I strongly recommend that he applies for all types of work in this field.
Regards,
Mohamud Oma
2 minutes ago - 3 days left Let me get this straight: You want me to rewrite this into standard English for a maximum of an additional 8 Yahoo points? To whomsoever it may concern,
PLV is a construction materials supplier. We have wealth of experience in dealing with all type of construction materials, which we supply worldwide.
In Jan 07, our company had set up a temporary office in Malaysia. Unfortunately, after five months of running our business there, we found that Malaysia is not a economically viable business location. Consequently, we had abandon entire project and move to some other neighboring sources.
On behalf PLV, I hereby certify that Mr. Abdulah had been employed by our company as a General Manager in our office in Hedura, Malaysia from 1 Jan,07 to 25th Apr,07. In recognition for his outstanding contribution our company鈥檚 business progress, I strongly recommend him as a competant Manager capable of discharging all type of projects in this field Re Lil.63's answer - couple of amendments:
2nd para, 3rd line - should read "did not reach"
last para, 2nd last line - should read "projects" not "projections"
Prab.'s version is a little effusive for my taste and there are spelling and grammatical errors.
That's my 2-cents-worth in writing such business letters, it is advisable not to use abbreviations especially on the name of the company and dates indicated on your letter. for the closing salutation, it should be either respectfully yours or sincerely yours and not regards which is only for a friendly letter though the grammars were good on this letter. A few little tweaks and this letter should be fine:
Regardless of whether you are sending this in an e-mail or through the post, you need to format your letter to look like a letter. What follows is how I think your letter should look:
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June 21, 2007
Company Contact (if unknown, skip)
Company Name
Address
To whom it may concern:
PLV [you should spell out what PLV stands for here; later in the letter, you can use the acronym] is a construction materials supplier. We are an experienced and qualified provider of construction materials, which we supply worldwide.
Our company had set up a temporary office in Malaysia in January 2007. Unfortunately, after five months of running our business there, we found that Malaysia is not a competitive market-source for our company. Consequently, we have had to suspend the entire project.
On behalf of PLV, I hereby certify that Mr. [First Name] Abdulah has been employed as a General Manager in our office in Hedura, Malaysia, from 1 January 2007 to 25 April 2007. In recognition of his outstanding performance in our company鈥檚 project, I strongly recommend him as an employee in any endeavor he chooses.
Regards,
Mohamud Oma |
