i dont have experience so this is all i can include :
Dear Ms.Name
I'm a freshman student at City College. During my high school years I earned sufficient entry level training for office work. I am writing to express my interest in applying for a similar position in which I can apply my organizational and communication skills. I'm an active person who enjoy participating in many activities as possible and I hope that the following experience correspond to the requirements for the position.
Experience with School Projects and Work
Developed leadership skills selling adds for high school yearbook, help organize food sales,trips,games, help sponsored fund raisers for the AIDS Walk, the Breast Cancer Walk, canned food drives and the toy drive,coach debating activities such as tertulias(book discussion),
Learn how to deal with legal and typical problems withing peers in school from unpaid internships. work in foreign language department and as a teacher assistant for a period of three semester
Learn how to work under pressure in a temporary job during summer time for 12 hours a day organizing files and helping clients to find the right products for their needs. this si a hw for a class right now not for a job , we are learning how to write cover letter, it doesnt has to be perfect Dear Ms.Name
My name is ____. I am a student in my first year at City College. I am writing to express my interest in applying for an entry level position in your company. During my high school years I earned sufficient entry level training for office work, and I think my organization and communication skills will be valuable to your company.
Let me tell you a little about myself. I am a very active person who enjoys participating in many activities. (tell a little more about yourself here--include some hobbies or recreational activities that might showcase some skills that would be relevant to the job)
(The rest should be included in your resume, which you would attach the cover letter to. In your case, I would recommend a combination skills-based and chronological) -The sentence in which you put 'I am an active person who enjoy...' should be 'I am an active person who enjoys...'
-In the same sentence you should correct it by saying 'in as many activities as possible' insted of 'in many activities as possible'
-The sentence in which you put 'I hope that the following experience...' should be 'I hope that the following experiences...'
-'...for high school yearbook...' should either be '...for the high school yearbook...' or '...for high school yearbooks...'
-'...help organize food sales...' should be changed to 'I help organize food sales...'
-'...coach debating activities...' should be changed to '...and coach debating activities...'
and much, much more.
I will continue later, because right now I have to go [: You need to treat your cover letter like a sales add for yourself.be careful with the language you use. you need to correct the learn how to deal line, as well as the learn how to work line. say it more along the line of " I have experience working under pressure... etc Your cover letter should only be a few paragraphs long and be tailored specifically to the company you are seeking employment with. Find out who does the hiring and use their name: (Dear Ms. Flanders).
Just give a brief "goals statement" in the cover letter like: Seeking a full-time position within (name the company) where my experience and knowledge would be a valued asset to your organization and meet my career goals.
Use the rest of your data in the resume itself.
Good Luck I asked for some clarification, once I receive those I will edit what I have added it needed.
"Dear Ms.Name
I would like to express my interest for the position of xxxxxx at your organisation. My organisational and communication skill would be a valuable asset to both the position and to your organisation.
I am a first year student at City College who has experience of office work and has been involved in many extra-curricular activities including organising fundraising events, being a teacher鈥檚 assistant in a foreign language department.
Please see my resume for a more detailed account of my experience.
Yours truly"
Thanks and good luck. | 