How does this resume look any suggestions?

name here
address here
Telephone:here - Email: here

SEEKING BANK TELLER POSITION

Experience:

- Over 2 years of cashier and face to face customer service experience
- Highly organized and detail oriented
- Superb customer service skills
- Able to multi-task
- Excellent leadership qualities
- Quick learner
- Able to remain calm in hectic/chaotic situations


EDUCATION & CERTIFICATIONS

High School Diploma, Garfield High School, city, state
Currently: Major-Business-Mesa College, city, state
Computer Skills: MS Word, Excel


EXPERIENCE

Zion Market, city, state 09/2005-11/2007
Cashier
- Provide excellent customer service by answering and tending to customers
- Process customer purchases
- Maintain and balance cash drawer
- Process monetary transactions


COMMUNITY ACTIVITIES

- Volunteer at local recreation center
- Homeless shelter volunteer
- Leader in group activities at church

Instead of "Experience" at the top, place relevant skills. Employers don't need to know in your resume you are a quick learner or have leadership qualities. These can be emphasized in a cover letter and/or an interview.

SKILLS

- Excellent customer service ability assisting customers.
- Familiar with MS Word, Excel, and additional computer programs/software.
- Detail-oriented and organized in a fast paced environment.

EXPERIENCE

~ Highlight not just duties, but accomplishments:

Zion Market

- Increased sales by providing customers with prompt and quick service.
- Accurately balanced and maintained cash drawer throughout hours worked.
- Etc., etc.

EDUCATION:

XYZ High School 2002 Your Town, State
ABC College 2007 - Present Your Town, State
Major - Business

If your community involvement has nothing to do with the position you're applying for, leave it out. You're on the right track but you need to clean it up and streamline things more. Good luck!

What did you do that really stands out while at Zion Market? Did you overcome an unusual problem for a customer? Give an example or two of what you can do for the prospective employer.

The ending is good, but the beginning needs a little work.

The layout is fine but you need to put the experience on the top. And when you speak of quick learner, multi-task, don't include it in the resume unless it describes a situation at a job if not, put it in the cover letter, for example: My work experience at ABC Inc, provided me with valuable experience in learning to manage several tasks at one time, and still provide excellent customer service.

And you need to improve the vocabulary and make it a little more clear. For example: instead of face to face, say customer interaction, and don't say answering customers, say assisting customers. Be specific, what did you do as a volunteer? How many were in the church group you led? Work on it a little, and it'll be great.

First you need to better detail your objective; example: my goal is to obtain a position as a bank teller so that i may better advance in my career as a head person working in the US treasury dept handling money.

another thing education come first, than job experience, which includes the details of the work you dealt with while holding that position then you add your certifications and skills that you think will qualify or look good on your resume and dont forget at least 3 excellent reference's.okkkkk

Excellent! Good luck. :)