My new poem "Man In the Trees" hope u like it?

Same window
new view

tonight I see a man in the trees
sitting over the telephone wires
flashlight in hand
pointed at my window
illuminating a small portion
of my cluttered pitch black room

first my pupils move the beams of light
across the cover creases
and my snoring sister becomes a blur

then the light fades
and I notice all the smudges on my window

why are they there?
I know how to remove them
Windex
a rag
the job鈥檚 simple

why not do it?
don鈥檛 have time?
too lazy?
doesn鈥檛 matter?

鈥淵ou know the answer to all these questions鈥?
says the man in the trees
who's there tonight to show me how distorted my view is!

I like poetry. It describes so many things beyond the mind that make you think.

Your poem is very interesting. The man in the trees makes you wonder...who is watching and what's really there.

U have talent, everybody does.

love the poem though. just let it flow.

:)

Interesting, be careful though, it was pretty sketchy and hard to understand until you tied it all satisfactorily together at the end. It's something to ponder though...nice job.

Scary. Call the police. Now.

sorry don't really like it...not that it's bad, it's just not to my taste...GOOD LUCK though

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