Need pronoun help please?

can someone please help me correct these pronouns?

Vincent doesn鈥檛 like visiting his in-laws because he never feels like part of the family.

Nadine told her niece that she would be famous someday.

I ordered three novels from the company鈥檚 website, but it never sent them.

Someone on the team shared his or her complaints with a reporter.

Ernie placed the ladder against the wall of the garage and he leaned against it for a moment.

Each of these jobs has its advantages: one has good pay, and the other has short hours.

I like to watch TV quiz shows because I can learn a lot from their questions.

The college instructors made sure the students understood that they were bright and capable.

Any salesperson in our office will win a free trip to Hawaii if they can sell one house in the next twenty-four hours.

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They all look good to me except the last one. I think "any" requires a "he or she" instead of "they."

Are you needing to identify and fix vague pronoun references? If so, you will want to identify each of the pronouns in the sentences and then ask yourself who does the pronoun refer to? Who is the pronoun replacing ? For example, the 2nd sentence:

Nadine told her niece that she would be famous someday.

Who is "she" ? Does that refer to Nadine or her niece. Who will be famous someday ?

The pronoun is not clear, and the sentence needs to be changed to clearly lable someone as the one to be famous someday.

You could change the sentence to:

Nadine told her niece that Nadine would be famous someday.

Same thing with the next sentence.

I ordered three novels from the company's website, but it never sent them.

Who is "it" ? Is "it" the company ? the website ? Clearly it is not the website, but this sentence is not clear so you can interpret it that way.

You could change the sentence to:

I ordered three novels from the company's website, but the company never sent them.

If you don't need to correct vague pronoun references then obviously disregard what I've typed, but if you do, then I hope this helps!

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