Please proofread the following paragraph?

"Don鈥檛 judge a book by its cover", is signifying that, not to judge someone from their outer appearance. If a guy walks in the office with a bald head with a tatoo located in his upper right side of his neck with an Old English font with the word, "Chato". Dont assume anything without asking. If a man with holes in his pants asking for money, dont assume he is a bum or he wants to buy a type of drug, ask him or her before you get any strange ideas. The man with the holes in his pants might use the money to give his friend a phone call or to pump gas in his automobile.
Yes, I have prejudged people without even thinking about it and there is a point where it always catches up to me and I have had other judge me as well. I have had a problem on judging certain individuals until I met a senior in his late 80's that ask me a question, "who are you to judge?" He planted a thought in my head that up to this day I still ask myself that question when I am about to judge someone.
Once you really get to understand an individual, that person begins to share hes outrageous story of his life with you. All of a sudden you begin to feel like you're a part of that journey. Every individual has a different book or a different story to share about their life. Dont judge or you'll be prejudged.

"Don鈥檛 judge a book by its cover" is signifying not to judge someone by their outer appearance. If a guy walks in the office with a bald head and a tattoo with the word "Chato", in Old English font, on his upper right side of his neck, don't assume anything without asking. If a man with holes in his pants asking for money, do not assume he is a bum. Do not assume he wants to buy some crack rocks or herion either. Instead, ask him or her before you get any strange ideas in your head. The man with the holes in his pants might use the money to give to his friend to make a phone call. Maybe he just needs to pump some gas in his automobile.
I admit that I have prejudged people without even thinking about it. There is however, a point where it always catches up to me. I have had other people judge me as well. I personally had a problem on judging certain individuals until I met a senior in his late 80's. This intriguing old man asked me a question, "who are you to judge?" He planted a thought in my head, and up to this day I still ask myself that same question every time I start to judge someone.
You should really get to understand an individual before you judge them. Once you do, that person begins to share outrageous stories of his life with you. All of a sudden you begin to feel like you're a part of that journey. Every individual has a different book or a different story to share about their life. Give the people you meet a chance to share it. You may just learn a thing or two. Always remember "Don't judge a book by it's cover" or you may be prejudged!

The first line, instead write: "Don't judge a book by its cover," signifies for an individual to not judge someone from their outer appearance.

**tattoo
**"Chato," don't assume...
**don't

**...without even thinking about it, and there is a point...

Instead of I have had a problem, say "I had encountered conflicts with judhing...

**his
**All of a sudden, you begin to feel like you ARE a part of that journey.
**you will be prejudged


I hate to correct you so much, because your idea behind it is great. Good luck!

A first pass... it is a bit long for a question.....

"Don鈥檛 judge a book by its cover", signifies to not judge someone based on their outer appearance. If a guy walks in the office with a bald head and a tatoo in the upper right side of his neck on an Old English font reading the word, "Chato", don't assume anything without asking.

If a man with holes in his pants asks you for money, don't assume he is a bum or wants to buy a type of drug, ask him before jumping to any strange conclusions. The man with the holes in his pants might use the money to give his friend a phone call or to pump gas into his automobile.
Yes, I have prejudged people without even thinking about it and there has always been a point where it always catches up to me; I have as well had others judge me. I had a problem on judging certain individuals until I met a senior in his late 80's that asked me a question, "who are you to judge?". He planted a thought in my head that still today makes myself ask that question when I am about to judge someone.
Once you really get to understand an individual, that person begins to share his outrageous life story with you. All of a sudden you begin to feel like you're a part of that journey. Every individual has a different book or a different story to share about their life. Don't judge or you'll be prejudged.

"Don鈥檛 judge a book by its cover" means not to judge someone from their outer appearance. If a guy walks in the office with a bald head with a tattoo located in his upper right side of his neck with an Old English font with the word "Chato," don't assume anything without asking. If a man with holes in his pants asking for money, don't assume he is a bum or he wants to buy drugs, ask him before you get any strange ideas. The man with the holes in his pants might use the money to give his friend a phone call or to pump gas in his automobile.

Yes, I have prejudged people without even thinking about it, and there is a point where it always catches up to me; I have had others judge me as well. I had a problem with judging certain individuals until I met a senior in his late 80's who asked me the question "Who are you to judge?" He planted a thought in my head that to this day I still ask myself when I am about to judge someone.

Once you really get to understand an individual, that person begins to share the outrageous story of his life with you. All of a sudden you begin to feel like you're a part of that journey. Every individual has a different story to share about their life. Don't judge or you'll be prejudged.

I just did some cosmetic changes. You might want to change the last line to the quote "Judge not, lest ye be judged."