Please revise the short paragraph plz its urgent?

Lastly, the benefit of maintaining Quebec in Canada is notable in politics. In 1982, the Official Language Act, which guarantees for the equal status of the two official languages, English and French, in Canada, is approved by Prime Minister Trudeau. This law is meaningful and beneficial for both French and English-Canadians. First, English and French have the equal status within government offices in Montr茅al. This law protects the right of Quebec鈥檚 English-speaking minority and French-speaking minorities. It encourages provincial governments to offer services in French and English. This brings Canada multicultural because this law gives non-English speakers opportunity to participate in Canadian society and have the right. In 1970, Manitoba restored French education system, and the ministry of Ontario began to teach in French after Trudeau signed. The provinces, then, gradually improved educational and services for Quebecois. If the Law wouldnt signed, Canada is not call multicultur

Lastly, the benefit of maintaining Quebec in Canada is notable in politics. In 1982, the Official Language (1 )Act, which guarantees for the (2)equal status of the two official languages(3) English and French, in Canada, is approved by Prime Minister Trudeau. This law is meaningful and beneficial for both French(4) and English-Canadians. First,(5) English and French(6) have(7) the equal status within government offices in Montr茅al(8). This law protects the right(9) of Quebec鈥檚 English-speaking minority and French-speaking minorities(10). It encourages(11) provincial governments to offer services in French and English.(12-13 ){This brings Canada multicultural because this law gives non-English speakers opportunity to participate in Canadian society and have the right.} In 1970, Manitoba(14) restored French education(15) system, .(16)and the ministry of Ontario began to teach in French after Trudeau signed. The provinces, then, gradually improved educational and services for Quebecois (l7) See addition and revision suggested.

My revision of final sentence:
The Official Languages Act (1982) is one reason why Canada can claim to be a multi-cultural country.

Match the numbers in the following list with those in your paragraph. I hope this is a satisfactory revision of your work.

1 Languages
2. omit 鈥渇or the鈥?here; move 鈥渇or鈥?to follow 鈥渟tatus鈥?br> 3. dash --- before 鈥淓nglish and following 鈥淔rench鈥?br> 4. hyphen here
5. insert 鈥渢he鈥?br> 6. insert 鈥渓anguage鈥?br> 7. omit 鈥渢he鈥?br> 8. insert 鈥渁nd throughout the province鈥?br> 9. 鈥渞ight鈥?should be plural 鈥渞ights鈥?here
10. insert 鈥渋n other provinces鈥?br> 11, insert 鈥渁ll鈥?br> 12-13 from { to } This is a sentence fragment with no verb.
And, I can not determine how to make sense of this piece.
Either revise yourself or omit this fragment.
14. replace 鈥?restored鈥?with 鈥減ut鈥?here
15. insert 鈥渂ack into its schools鈥?
16. that leaves your statement about Ontario another fragment. So:
The Ministry of Education in Ontario created a French curriculum for its schools in 1982 after Prime Minister Trudeau signed The Act into law. All other provinces and territories in Canada, then gradually introduced education and government services in both French and English where significant minorities located.

QUESTION: Are you aware that a) New Brunswick is by law the only official bi-lingual Canadian province?
Or of b) the recent controversy within the schools about second-language options in NB?

17. Therefore: my own edit and revision:
. New Brunswick, the only officially bi-lingual province in Canada, today, recently proposed a change in the Ministry of Education second-language curriculum . This change allows for ALL children to receive LATE (grade 5) second-language education; and withdraws the option of EARLY (kindergarten) second-language education. The Education Minister, who favours the change, met with so much parental opposition to the proposed change in the law that its passage is delayed.

im not the best at this but it sounds good, just i would change a few things...
on the 2nd line i would write, 'which guarantees for the equal status of the two languages in Canada, English and French' or maybe leave out 'in Canada' entirely as you specify you are talkin about Canada in the line before.
'This brings Canada multicultural'-maybe 'This makes Canada a multicultural country/soceity.
'participate in Canadian society and have the right' i would change to have rights, or else have the right to ...(and specify some examples)
'after Trudeau signed...the legislation? the bill? specify what it was he signed
gradually improved educational and services for Quebecois. If the Law wouldnt signed, Canada is not call multicultur ..... gradually improved the education system and local services or educational services? If the law WASN'T signed, Canada would not be considered multicultural./the French/English minorities would not be recognised under legislation so would have no human or legal rights in Canada?
I don't know how much this helped but i hope so, good luck