Can you PLEASE help me with my homework?introductory paragraph?

here is the outline of an essay.I need to write an introductory paragraph for it can you help me?

the advantages of living in the twenty-first century
1.more money for less hard work
A.more offices than manual workers
B.higher salaries
C.increased government services
a.social security
b.unemployment benefits

2.lonfer life expectancy
A.better medical care
a.more hospitals,doctors,nurses
b.advances in medical technology
B.improved nutrition
C.more leisure time

3.modern conveniences
A.communication
a.telephones
b.radio and TV
B.labor-saving machines in the home
a.dishwashers
b.washing machines/dryers
c.vacuum cleaner
C.faster transportation

please help me.If you can give me examples and tell me which
parts of the outline I should mention in my introductory paragraph.and please no sites.I know all of them ,but I need help with the very outline
thanks

There are many advantages and disadvantages to living in the 21st century. Personally, I think there are more advantages. There is longer life expectancy, more money for less hard work, and many modern conveniences.

Paragraph #1: Because we now have advances in medical technology, there is longer life expectancy....

Paragraph #2: We also receive more money for less hard work...

Paragraph #3: Many advantages of living in the 21st century come from modern conveiniences..

Your conclusion should sum up your paper./restate your thesis from the intro paragraph

That's what I'd write!! Is it 21st century America? If it is, you could also say something about how all humans are treated equal, or how everyone has the right to vote. Hope that helped!

what is the actual question you have to answer, or is it just a research paper?

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　　Meeting Room 　　Meeting Space 　　Conference Room 　　Offices to Lease 　　Rent Offices 　　Business Centers 　　Service Offices 　　Branch Offices 　　Temporary Offices 　　Shared Offices 　　Commercial Space 　　Office Space

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