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Another time, Another place

Instant connection I鈥檒l never forget
Two hearts beating at a feverish pace
Would it be different if we had met
In another time, in another place

Temptation that I must rise above
Longing to feel your warm embrace
Missing out on what could be true love
In another time, in another place

Nighttime provides a sanctuary
Dreams create memories I cannot erase
Open and honest, no feelings to bury
In another time, in another place

The story of us will never be told
Love held captive by time and space
No way to know how it would all unfold
In another time, in another place

I love it! The lines, In another time, in another place viberate throughout the whole poem. The story is clear, the connections are made, but due to circumstances, maybe more could have happened in another time, in another place. Don't give up your writings. Would like to read more of them. But aren't you worried about your copyright? Or do you already have it? Share more if you have you C. Be carefully if you don't. I am a poet and I honor other peoples work, some people might not.

[clapping] it's very good, it's the simple things that makes poems like this so great. It is meaningful and has heart and emotion in it. It is not a bunch of long words that rhyme with one another, two thumbs way, way, up.

Email me at hfcduke2@yahoo.com and i will send you some poems that i wrote, i would love to have your opinions, (keep in mind that i am only 13.)

wow!!!, this is really good !

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