Check my poem for grammar mistakes?

This is what I have so far.....:

I went to sleep at 9 o'clock,
And woke up in a strange place.
I was not in my room, nor my house,
I am in outer space.

It is not just a space,
Since it is full of plants,
And little weeds that sings,
And with stars wearing pants.

I wander through the space,
With curiosity in my mind,
And to find the way back home,
From this strange ____

As I try to find Earth,
I met little talking flowers,
And weird fairies,
Who lead me to floating towers.

I went inside one tower,
And saw a beautiful stream
That leads me back to Earth,
But then I fall down back to my room and realized it鈥檚 a dream.

Can you check for grammars?
Do you like it?
Can you help me fill in the blank for lines 12? 'cause i cant think of a word that rhymes with mind and to fit in with the sentence...

Also, if you could, rewrite some lines or all the lines of the poem to make it better??

------I am in 6th grade :)

Its a narrative poem :D

that is really good for line twelve you could repeat strange place repition is good in poetry

That is good for a 6th grader! Just make sure your poem is all in one tense and doesnt shift from past to present. Ex: "I was not in my room, nor my house I was in outer space" and also "went inside one tower, leade me back to earth, then I FALL down back" just make your verbs either all in the past or all in the present tense.

Also you put "weeds that sings" it needs to be "weeds that sings"

Other than that, good job!

wow you're in 6th grade. thats pretty good for a 6th grader you should keep writing you have a talent.