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What words rhyme with mind and fit this sentence?


( look at Lines 12)

I went to sleep at 9 o'clock,
And woke up in a strange place.
I was not in my room, nor my house,
I am in outer space.

It is not just a space,
Since it is full of plants,
And little weeds that sings,
And with stars wearing pants.

I wander through the space,
With curiosity in my mind,
And to find the way back home,
From this strange ____

As I try to find Earth,
I met little talking flowers,
And weird fairies,
Who lead me to floating towers.

I went inside one tower,
And saw a beautiful stream
That leads me back to Earth,
But then I fall down back to my room and realized it鈥檚 a dream.

I think "out of this strange bind" would work well.

find

Find. Then change "find" in line 13 to "locate" to avoid the repetition. Also change line 11 to "And make my way back home".

Just a thought. *shrug*

"from this strange bind"

oh yeah im pro!!! =)

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