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I TRIED

I tried something new
Who would've thought i'd be still stuck on you
I understand that it's over, you said we were through
Those words from your mouth were like a nightmare come true
I tried something new
'Cause my heart had it's first chance of replacing you
I played tricks with my head with visions of who?
Once again it was you, whom i'd tried to pursue
I tried to replace
I thought i'd exchange you for a whole 'nother face
'Cause from the sound of your voice, you needed your space
I tried to replace
But you in my heart left much more than a trace
I tried to forget
Forget all those butterflies i had when we met
Forget the illusions my heart on you set
All those tears that i cried
I tried to forget
I didn't want to be sad
So i tried...
I tried being angry
Offended
Spiteful
Annoyed
Trying to fade my emotions destroyed
I tried being mad
I tried to be reasonable
I tried to be smart
I tried to forget i wanted YOU from the start

this poem is awesome!
OMG wow your really talented i'm afriad your better at poetry than me lol :)

I love your poem. Very confessional. Just remember though, by giving him this you're putting your heart on the line, be ready for anything.

You suceeded :P
We should make a place to post these poems like an archieve online it would be great :P
Go for gold XD

I really like it! Nice Work!

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