Is my work more of a letter than of a poem? Pls also give comment!?

Predicament

I was looking at the start gain
Wishing and hoping to find waht was there
That vast space of velvet darkness
I have spent my life waiting for someone
Someone that will make it all come true
I've meet so many people, friends
That ahve already gone & left.
I wish, this time when I turn around
You are there
Standing and waiting
My heart knows where she belongs
And she calls only to you.
But I am here still leaning in a cold hard wall
Waiting for you shoulder
And your heart I can own
What is taking you so long?
Has someone already owned you heart?
Has she already taken you away from me?
Why am i crying for someone
I never meet, whom i never knew
Me, unknown to his kiss
me, unknown to his face
The feeling of his touch
The sound of his voice
Me, whose only a pigment of a dream
I don't exits to him & him to me
But if you don't really exist
Why does it hurt inside...

i think this is like one of worst written poems am i right?

"My heart knows where she belongs
And she calls only to you."
I would change she to 'it' here.
Otherwise it's very nice

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