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Chapter 1.
Jade is the youngest in the group and has just finished her last day of set out to

celebrate that night."Hey you guys! you fancy comming out tonite?" Jade shouted

down the street to the rest of the group, Brendon runs up behind her "did you have

a nice time at college then?" he laughs then hugs her. Sophie turns around "Ahh i

can see some love arissing!" Sophie felt left out because she hadent had a boy friend

for some time. Jade walked up to sophie "hey you ok?" she smiled at sophie "yeah

im fine why wouldent i be?" Sophie pulled a strange face then smiled back, "well

you fancy comming out later tonite? you never know we might find some one for

you!" Jade laughed. "May aswell i've got nothing better to do!" Sophie sounded

bleak and bored she was the oldest in the group. Sophie links arms with her "Come

on you lot" Jade shouted down to the rest of the group who are half way down the

street from them, "Ok ok were comming!" Brendon shouts. Sarah felt her phone

vibrate in her pocket she picks it up. Confussed because the number was with held

she answered it "Hello who's this?" she asked "Oi, it's Lucy you comming out ?"

Lucy replied "yeah we will come and pick you up in ten minutes " Sarah hangs up

."Oi you guys Lucy just rang me she wants us to pick her up in ten minutes then"

Sarah shouts down to the group, Jade got annoyed "but i wanted to go home to get

ready" They stopped by a shop courner to try and sort out what they are doing. "Ok

wait there im just going to the shop!" April walked around the courner into the

shop, she looked around the shop as she pulled out her purse "i'd like a packet of

fags and a bottled of vodka please" she said to the woman standing behind the till

she passed her the fags and vodka, "Right that will be six pounds fifty please" the

women told April. She pulled out ten pounds and handed it to her "you can keep the

change!" April said as she walked out the shop, she pulled out her fags "Any one got

a lighter?" April asked the group Sarah opened her bag and pulled out her lighter

and handed it to April "i always bring a spare" Sarah laughs "oh i forgot we've got

to pick Lucy up in ten minutes" Sarah dramtically tells the group."Right Jade, Jake

and Brendon you go pick up Lucy and the rest of us will meet up with you in the

night club called City Lights"April quickly told the group Sophie pulled out her

phone her and called the taxi line, "they said they will be here in about five

minutes" Sophie looked at her phone it was twenty past seven. They stood there

patiently waiting for the taxi when finally it arrived, the black taxi pulled up and the

window opened to sophie's amazment it was a young man in his twentys his eyes

were brown and he had brown streaks going through his hair, Sophie took one look

at him and knew from there she fancied him. She stood there just gazing at him he

smiled "Where you of to then?, i suppose you're of to the biggest night club in town

City Lights!" he smiled as Sophie noded, "i think Sophie likes him!" April

whispered to Kirsty so Kirsty walked up to Sophie "talk to him" she walked of and

got in the taxi and rest of the group followed except from Sophie. "Arent you

comming?" the man in taxi asked Sophie "huh!?-oh yer sorry" she got in to the taxi.

Chapter 2.
The taxi pulled of, April reached her hand in her bag and pulled out the bottle of

vodka "any one fancy sharing it with me?"April looked around as she opened it "i

will! i love vodka!" Kirsty shouted so April took the first swig and passed it to

Kirsty instead of taking a swig Kirsy downed half of the bottle "Kirsty!" April

shouted "what? i cant help it! i told you i love the stuff!" Kirsty laughed. April

looked amazed as she took the bottle back "Ok Kirsty i know i said do you want to

share it with me i dident mean you could down almost all of it!" April laughed as

she took a mouth full,"ok you guys were almost here!" the man driving the taxi

shouts and pulls over into a parking lot "right were here that will be five pounds

fifty please" he told the group Sophie reached into her purse and pulled out a ten

pound note "For you babe you can keep the change!" she winked at the driver "Hey

whats your number?" the driver shouts above the music to ask sophie. She got

embarrsed and went red "go on then what you waiting for!" the group urged her to

give him her number "she slowly went to the man. My name is Sophie" and gave

him a kiss on the cheek! "Well my name is Aiden" he told Sophie and smiled "heres

my number" the the taxi driver pulls out his phone "right it's 07766907119" she put

her phone away and smiled then left him to drive of! "Oh my god you guys! I cant

belive that happened" Sophie laughed with joy, everyone was happy for her "Right

then there's a bench over there lets wait for them over there" April suggested so

they all walked over to the bench and sat down. Leo looks over to the club "i'm

going to talk to those ladies over there!" he tells the group as he walks of. "Leave us

then!" April shouts "ah dont worry you know whats he's like always leaving us for

the ladies!" Neil laughs and looks at April, they all wait for the rest of the group to

come.

Chapter 3.
"Come on it's been like half an hour already" April starts to get impatient, "i

wonder where they have got to" Paul walks up and down the road while sarah pulls

out her phone. "I will ring her" she dialled Lucy's number and waited for her to

answer "Lucy how lony are you going to be ?" Sarah asked her "well were on our

way now Jade wanted to get ready, we will be about ten minutes" Lucy told Sarah

"ok see you then" from that they hung up. "Well what did they say?" April asked

Sarah "they said they will be about ten minutes, there on there way now. Jade

wanted to get ready thats why they are so late!" Sarah gasped for breath "here they

are now!" Kirsty shouted "finally!" April sighed. Lucy was the first to get out the

taxi and Jake the last because he was the one that was going to pay for the taxi, Lucy

gave April a hug "Couldent wait to see me ay?" she laughed "no i couldent" April

linked arms with her. "Hey wait for me" Jake shouted back to the group as they

walked of, he ran the meet up with them "oh my gosh! You will never guess what

happened to me!" Sophie smiled and laughed "Go on then tell us" Brendon asks.

"Well i got chated up by this well fit lad!" Sophie excitedly says, the rest of the

group laugh as the go into the club.

Chapter 4.
"Jade your lookin rather beautiful tonite!" Brendon turns and puts his arm around

her. All the group can hear is the music blaring in background as they go and put

there bags in the bags and coat room, they walk through an empty alley way that

leads them to the dance floor."Wow!"April couldn't believe her eyes, the dance

floor was filled with people as the lights flashed 'green' 'purple' 'red' and 'orange'.

The music was so loud they couldn't even hear thems themselves think, "Hey my

favorite song!"April shouted to Kirsty. A young broad man meduim height wearing

casual clothes whispered into Lucy's ear "Hey fancy a dance?" Lucy turned around

"what do you think?-oh! sorry about that" she laughed "come on then!" Lucy

grabbed his hand and walked to the dance floor. However as it seems that Lucy was

getting all the luck! The group had just forget about April, she stood there waiting

for someone to talk to her as she started to get bored. "Hey there! You look bored

would you mind if i sit with you?", April turned around as she pulled out a fag

"Hmmm" April quickly decided "go on then, beings every one eles has left me would

you like one?" April pointed to a fag and smiled. "No i dont smoke, can i get you a

drink?"the man walked over at the bar and asked for to vodka's with cokes "So you

dont smoke but you drink that makes sense" April laughed as she took a swig of the

vodka and coke. "I forgot to ask you whats your name" the man smiled and look

over at April "Yeah im April" she held out her hand to indicate a hand shake but

instead the man bent over and kissed her on the lips. "What was that for?"

confussed and embarssed she could feel her self burn up in the cheek! "Yeah my

name is Matty and im glad i came here tonight overwise i wouldent have meet you!"

he smiled "you fancy a dance?" April hadent said anything for a while she was still

getting over the shock that he had just kissed her! "Come on then" April smiled as

they walked over to dance floor.

Chapter 5.
Meanwhile Leo comes back after talking to the ladies at the front "God they was

hard to talk to!" he laughs and points over to them "Well i cant be long im getting a

round in!" Jake looks over "Hey one of them is fine! You mind if i come over if i get

the round?" he pulls out his wallet to get his money "Yeah go on then they want

three spirits and what ever you want also i'd like a beer!" Leo walks back over

"well you dont ask for much!". Jade and Brendon walk back from the dance floor

"wow im so tired!" they both sit down on a small seat by the bar.

its realy good cant wait until you finish it.

yeah.

but learn how to spell.

xx

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