Would you read this story?? I would really like opinions it it.?

I am currently creating a story. I just want to know peoples opinion on it so far. It's about a girl named Keiko whose older sister Yoko is an award winning author. Keiko's sister is currently working on a new book. One night, Keiko visits Yoko's room to see if she is working, but her sister has already fallen asleep. She notices Yoko's new book on the table and decides to look through it for a minute. When she touches the book, though, she is suddenly transported inside of it. Now, Keiko has to live in the world her sister created and fight many unknown beasts. In the book, Keiko meets five other induviduals who are a fighting group called the Chikara. She is especially drawn to their leader named Kenji. He's hot headed but also caring and smart. Meanwhile, Yoko, who had witnessed her sister being taken, has to find out why and how her sister was transported. She's determined to get her sister back. In the end, will Keiko really want to leave Kenji and the others?

Thanks! But the book i'm writing is on paper so I can't send it to anyone...thanks for the opinions though. i will try to change it into more of an original!

Sounds like every anime ever. No.

I really like the fact that part of it is being told from the outside view, that makes it different, maybe if you focused more on that or like Keiko might actually be the main character in her sisters book or help finish it or something like that

but if you focus on some love story in it it seems like fushigi yugi or several other books

I think it would be better if she tried to steal your sisters story and the book was a conflict between the two but its sounds kinda out there

nope. it sounds very "neverending story".

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yesssss.
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You should send me the finished story when you're done. It sounds very interesting. :D

Sounds like a interesting story line to me.

I would read your story all the way!

i will defiantly read this book,

I might read it, but it sounds kind of like "Inkheart" by Cornilia Funk