What do you think of this.........?

No One



Noone ever listened noone ever cared thoughts of suicide were running
through
her head She hears the whispers that shes better off dead she sits in her
room and wonders everyday, if words dont hurt then why do they cause me so
much pain? Another day of school, another day of hate was more than she
could
take. So she went into her bathroom, quickly locked the door, and slowly
opened the drawer she held the razor in her hands, her parents would be
home
soon no more hesitations, she quickly made the wounds. She went to school
the
next day hiding her new scars, these people came up to her, she wondered
who
they were, they showed her all their scars and shared all their pain,
these
people that she met helped her survive another day. But others brought her
down, sorrow filled her head, she went home and her parents found her
dead.

this is what is going through my head at times.

how depressing and true. this is great. a good writer is a good story teller and you had me the whole time. good job

Wow, intense and very well written. Im not sure if u want a response to the literature or the story it tells considering the section you've chosen to put it in. a few lines near the end are very slightly of the rhythm, I found. But appropriately and powerful descriptions. good title too. Very sad, to think how truthful this is, the extent people around us can effect others lives.

Wow
That's amazing but amazingly sad that you think these things (if the speaker and writer are connected that is). I don't know how right it is for people to say that your poem is so amazing because (although it is) it could encourage thoughts like this. You need to speak to someone if you're thinking these things, honestly..before it's too late.

This is very sad to think how true it is,This is also really intense, a cuple of lines near the end are kinnda of rhythm. Nice title though!.
:]
xx

i think its pretty good and descriptive..the whole time reading i couldnt stop and i was picturing it in my head. its sad though