Please can you check my english writing the below text , and can you tell me if I have mistake .thank you much

About yesterday
Well, yesterday was very nice day. I woke up around nine o鈥檆lock, I took a shower, than I had my breakfast. From last month I started to do exercise, in my home, because I felt I鈥檓 so scene. I bought dumbbells and some staff such as need how to do exercise correctly, so I exercised like an hour than went to work.
Evening I got home from work at 6 o'clock. My mother had prepared dinner which I ate immediately. After I had cleaned up my room and did homework until eight o鈥檆lock. I watched TV for about an hour. Then I got ready to go out with some friends. My friends arrived at about 9 o'clock and we chatted for a while. Later we decided to visit a night club and we met some pretty girl, we danced, and we had good time. We really enjoyed ourselves and stayed late. We finally left at one o'clock in
the morning. I think that yesterday was most interesting day within a week
.

Well, yesterday was a very nice day. I woke up around nine o鈥檆lock, I took a shower, then I had my breakfast. Last month I started working out at home, because I felt I鈥檓 so scene< (I don't understand this part). I bought weights and stuff needed to exercise correctly. I exercised about an hour, then went to work.
I got home from work at 6 o'clock. My mother had prepared dinner which I ate immediately. After I had cleaned up my room and did homework until eight o鈥檆lock. I watched TV for about an hour. Then I got ready to go out with some friends. My friends arrived at about 9 o'clock and we chatted for a while. Later we decided to visit a night club and we met some pretty girl, we danced, and we had good time. We really enjoyed ourselves and stayed late. We finally left at one o'clock in the morning. I think that yesterday was most interesting day all week.

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you need to revise it and write it better i would give it a C- if you were my student

Yesterday was very nice day. I woke up around nine o鈥檆lock and after a Shower I had my breakfast. From last month I started to do exercise, in my home, because I felt I鈥檓 so obese. I bought dumbbells and some staff such as need how to do exercise correctly, so I exercised like an hour than went to work.
Evening I got home from work at 6 o'clock. My mother had prepared dinner which I ate immediately. After I had cleaned up my room and did homework until eight o鈥檆lock. I watched TV for about an hour. Then I got ready to go out with some friends. My friends arrived at about 9 o'clock and we chatted for a while. Later we decided to visit a night club and we met some pretty girls, we danced, and we had good time. We really enjoyed ourselves and stayed late. We finally left at one o'clock in the morning. I think that yesterday was most interesting day in this week

I have edited as per my knowledge..