Please help check grammar too if you would. English is my second language. Thank you
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Dear Ms. Smith,
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about at Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator at the Fund for Global Human Rights. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
It was a pleasure to discuss my future with your organization. I was very impressed to learn that expend your grantees in South East and Central Asia Regions. I am excited for the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. As I indicated, my passsion, academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I am willing to learn new tasks and would bring my interpersonal and organizational skills necessary to get the job done efficiently.
I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone鈥?.or e-mail鈥?
Thank you very much again for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope I am sorry for the error. It should be an Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator position.. Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk WITH me about THE POSITION OF Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator at the Fund for Global Human Rights. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
It was a pleasure to discuss my POSSIBLE future with your organization. I was very impressed to learn that YOUR ORGANIZATION HAS expAndED your grantees in South East and Central Asia Regions. I am excited ABOUT THE PROSPECT OF helpING your organization continue to grow in the future. As I indicated, my passsion, academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I am willing to learn new tasks and would bring my interpersonal and organizational skills to get the job done efficiently.
I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions FOR FILLING THIS POSITION ARE MADE. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone鈥?.or e-mail鈥?
Thank you very much again for your consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope Try this one on for size:
Hope Last-Name
Address
City, State Zip
Telephone
Email Address
Date
Ms. Maxine Smith
Title (Executive Director?)
Fund for Global Human Rights
Address
City, State Zip
Dear Ms. Smith:
Thank you very much for discussing the Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator position at the Fund for Global Human Rights with me this past _____day/date___.
It was indeed a pleasure to discuss my future with the Fund for Global Human Rights. I was very impressed to learn more about the Fund鈥檚 many goals in South East and Central Asia Regions and I am excited at the possibility of helping the Fund continue to grow even more in the future. As we discussed, my academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for this cause, I am eager to learn new tasks, and truly feel I can contribute much to the Fund for Global Human Rights.
Ms. Smith, I am so very excited at the prospect of working with you to advance the Fund for Global Human Rights many goals and look forward to hearing from you in the near future to discuss next steps. In the meantime, please do not hesitate to contact me by telephone or by email should you require additional information.
Again, thank you so very much again for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope Last-Name I made corrections to your paper.
To Ms. (Insert first name) Smith:
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about the Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator position for the Fund for Global Human Rights. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
It was a pleasure to discuss my future with your organization. I was very impressed to learn that expend your grantees in South East and Central Asia Regions. I am excited for the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. As I indicated earlier, my passion, academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I am willing to learn new tasks and would bring the interpersonal and organizational skills necessary to get the job done efficiently.
I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone or e-mail.
Thank you again for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope Dear Ms. Smith,
I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for the Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator at the Fund for Global Human Rights.
It was a pleasure to discuss my future with your organization. I was very impressed to learn that expend your grantees in South East and Central Asia Regions. I am excited for the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. As I indicated, my passion, academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition, I am willing to learn new tasks and would bring my interpersonal and organizational skills necessary to get the job done efficiently.
I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions regarding this position have been finalized. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me by phone鈥?. or e-mail鈥?
Thank you again for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope Your letter sounds good except for three changes...
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about the Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator at the Fund for Global Human Rights.
I was very impressed to learn that expend your grantees in South East and Central Asia Regions. ... not sure exactly what you are trying to say here, but it doesn't quite make sense...did you mean expand?
I am excited at the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. Dear Ms. (Insert First Name or Title)Smith(;)
Thank you very much for taking time out of your busy schedule to talk to me about an Executive Assistant/Associate Grants Administrator position at the Fund for Global Human Rights. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
It was a pleasure to discuss my future with your organization. I was very impressed to learn that you expend your grantes in South East and Central Asia Regions. I am excited for the possibility to help your organization continue to grow even more in the future. As I indicated, my passsion, academic background, and work experiences from Bowie State University and the Royal Thai Embassy support my strong interest in the position. In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I am willing to learn new tasks and would bring my interpersonal and organizational skills to get the job done efficiently.
I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me by phone or e-mail.
Thank you again for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hope (Insert you last name)
(Also include your phone number, mailing address, and email address below your name so it will be easy for her to contact you. GOOD LUCK!!!) |
