Could you please revise the third paragraph. Please see below ....?

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Regarding your request for hotel arrangement for Conference in Makati, we gladly inform you that we have booked a hotel room at the .... (about five minutes鈥?drive from the conference venue) from 6th to 17th December.

However, the hotel requires full pre-payment for the room reserved today (by 5 pm). The total rate for seven nights is USD 1750 (@night: USD 250).

Could you please confirm to us as soon as possible whether or not you want to take that hotel room?

And is there any grammatical errors in the second paragraph? Thanks

Can you please confirm with us whether you still want to book the hotel room?

I think.

nope

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