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Can someone help me correct this complicated paragraph in French? *I need someone who is fluent in French!!*?


I need to know how to say. "If you need someone who is reliable, has a lot of experience and is responsible, then please consider interviewing me. My phone number is (123) 456-7890. Thank you for your time and consideration. I will be looking forward to your call.

Okay can someone check to see if this is correct?

Si tu a besoin quelqu鈥檜n qui est reliable, a beaucoup d鈥檈xperience, et est responable, consid茅re interviewer moi. Vous pouvez me telephoner au (123) 456-7890. Merci pour votre temps et attention!

I am not at all fluent in french, can someone help me correct this without changing much since I don't know much. Also don't use the translator please! Thanks!! Ten points for whoever gives the most accurate answer. =]

Recherchez-vous un collaborateur fiable, professionnel, conscient de ses responsabilit茅s ? Laissez-moi la chance de vous en convaincre - interviewez moi - et appelez moi au
123456789 - Merci pour le temps et l'attention que vous me consacrerez - A bient么t -

Si vous cherchez quelqu'un de fiable, responsable et qui a beaucoup d'exp茅rience contactez moi pour une entrevue. Mon num茅ro de t茅l茅phonne est le (123) 456-7890. Je vous remercie pour l'attention que vous apportez 脿 ma candidature. J'attend de vos nouvelles sous peu.

You can say it like this.. I did change : Thank you for your time and consideration. I will be looking forward to your call.

Because you can't say it that way in french but it mean the same thing.
If you have other question my first language is french.

You should not use the "tu" form in a letter applying for a job! Not if you want to stand a chance of getting the job, that is. It is for informal use, as between family members or close friends. Also, reliable is not a French word. Unless it means something that could be "reli茅", i.e. bound as in a book.
I also would have worded the first sentence a little differently.
How about
Si vous avez besoin d'une personne fiable et responsable, n'h茅sitez pas 脿 m'accorder un entretien.

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