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So guarded you are. I don't see any form to this poetry. Your adjectives are nice and it seems to be a poem about a confusion of love or unrequited love or lust. I feel pain in this poem. It is unusual form and I would stretch it to say that it is free form. Thoughts can be magical so keep writing them down. Never give up on writing any type of poetry no matter what anyone says. Poetry is about feelings and writing them down. So carry on and keep going! Good luck and I hope you have accomplishes what you set out to do. flat magnetic poetry wow. really really good. im not sure what its about but it definately sounds deep :):) sounds pretty good to me. sounds like someone going thru love and confusion and hurt. haha ok well i'll be honest, i only read the first line and stopped because in the very first line, you are talking like yoda!! maybe change the first line and leave everything else? lol crush on another, mixed signals from other, sexual frustration My opinion...the speaker wants to be with a significant other yet the person is guarded by different means. They get to be together and unrealistic expectations come in the relationships and in the end the speaker just wants to be left alone. i don't know what to say huh . . . cheeky. or not. you have a good voice and grasp of apt language. just not a big fan of the subject matter. relationship poetry has been beaten into the ground. there are countless poems talking about the same thing. ultimately, i think you have potential to be a great poet. just try to have original subject matter. it actually speaks to me Magical love |
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