What do you think of my new song?

it's called

call a spade a spade

verse
may be i sound rude
i may sound discriminating
but i tell you one truth
i don't lie, i don't cheat anyone
'cause i call a spade a spade
as everybody said not to lie

verse
yet, they contridict
their own statements
i don't know why (i don't know why)
they say i'm really straight forward
people get offended when i say a word
i can't survive in this world
but didn't you say
to call a spade a spade

chorus
i never meant to hurt someone
i never lied just for the sake of fun
i just call a spade a spade
i just call a spade a spade
as everybody said not to lie
never meant someone to cry

bridge

yet, if you think
i'm wrong to tell the truth
then i'm guilty
i won't be what i want to be
(i won't be what i want to be)
i'm guilty (i'm guilty)

chorus
never meant to hurt someone
never lied for the sake of fun
just called a spade a spade
just called a spade a spade

Honestly, it's just okay... but you could still improve it! For one, don't keep repeating the title of the song. It will seem as though you've ran out of words. Secondly, change your choice of words. They're kind of limited, so expand them. When you do that, it brings out more meaning in the song.

I'd give it 6 out of 10. But I like it though.

Well it is a start....Got to start somewhere right.

honestly bro, not to be rude...but this song sucks big time. Dont quit your day job

the meaning of your song's good, but it's not just sound like a song.
sorry If hurt u.
But go on, may be the next one will e a hit.

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