Poem i wrote after a break up?

With tears in her eyes.
She walked away.
It was hard to comprehend.
That things would never be the same.
But then he sent her those notes.
That showed her he doesnt care.
So then she knew.
She didnt need him there.
Her heart was already in pieces.
And he broke it even more.
When he gave her that paper.
Calling her a "cold-hearted whore"
No longer does she mind.
That she doesnt feel his touch.
He's not the right guy.
If he was, he wouldn't have hurt her that much.
It wasn't neccesary.
For him to get payback.
So it doesnt hurt.
That his love is what she lacks.
So she wiped away her tears.
Forgot about the past.
Looked forward to the future.
And smiled because it didnt last.

Like it?
The situation was i broke up with my boyfriend. & he started giving me letters calling me a "cold-hearted whore" & others that just made me feel horrible. & i realized that he isnt worth being sad over. hes jsut mean!

wow sounds like the guys an asshole but the poem was very deep you should consider posting more of your work for people who have been through similar situations

It doesn't even rhyme ughhhhhh retard.

good for you! awesome poem too!

yeah, i like it :]

haha I liked it good job im sorry but I feel bad for u because he hurt u soo much ive had that before

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