Could you please check this for grammatical errors? Please - Part 3?

Gas and electricity
Gas and electricity has gone up from 拢210 to 拢250. The business should try to save as much as it ca anyway possible. Use gas and electricity comparison service to find the cheapest energy supplier for your. By swapping a normal bulbs to an energy saving bulbs 鈥?you could cut energy wastage and save cash on electric bills. Gas bills may go up during the winter heating season as a result of price increases. Cooler weather also could increase it because of gas usage.

Vehicle lease
Among the vehicle lease is far too high. Review your lease is to high, shop around for the cheapest car leasing deals. The business can exchange their vehicles for smaller or cheaper ones.

Sales in August
Sale has decreased in August form 拢3461 to 拢2800.
The business should try to find out why the sale figure rapidly decreased.
August is one of the hottest moths. Any decrease in sale in this period may be caused by poor weather or other unforeseen factors, such as competitors.

Gas and Electricity
Gas and electricity has gone up from 拢210 to 拢250. The business should try to save as much as it can anyway possible. Use gas and electricity a comparison service to find the cheapest energy supplier for you. By swapping a normal bulb to an energy saving bulb you could cut energy waste and save cash on electric bills. Gas bills may go up during the winter heating season as a result of price increases. Cooler weather also could increase it because of gas usage.

Vehicle lease
******I'm not sure what this paragraph is trying to say, so I'm going to assume it is refering to the price of leasing a vehicle*****

Among the company vehicles, lease costs are far too high. Review your lease, and if it is too high, you should consider shopping around for cheaper prices or deals on a new car lease. The business can exchange their vehicles for smaller or cheaper ones.

Sales in August
Sales have decreased in August from 拢3461 to 拢2800.
The business should try to find out why the sales figures have rapidly decreased.
August is one of the hottest months. Any decrease in sale in this period may be caused by poor weather or other unforeseen factors, such as competitors.

what's this paper for? not trying to be mean, but i've found errors in almost every sentence besides the first and last sentences in the 3rd part (Sales in August). the way you worded the whole thing is just weird.

third line word 4 should be can

my teachers always say that the word "should" is bad...

...if u are trying to convice someone say something like must...ex:"The business MUST try to save as much as it ca anyway possible

not likely, do your own homework!!!

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