Nobody else would help me :(. Can you please help proof read my resume?

OBJECTIVE Succeeding in a competitive business environment in which I can capitalize on my customer service skills and strong work ethic

EDUCATION
Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008
(Human Resources Management)
Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
G.P.A. 3.70/4.0

Bachelor of Arts in Political Science Graduation: May 2006
Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
G.P.A. 3.21/4.0 (Completed 4-year program in 3 years)

WORK EXPERIENCE
Graduate Assistant to the Chair August 2006-Present
Department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration Bowie State University, Bowie, MD

鈥?Organizing conference/internship/scholarship opportunities
鈥?Managing graduate students鈥?official files and documents
鈥?MPA program liaison
鈥?Advising undergraduate students
鈥?Developing and updating department website
鈥?Broadcasting information and scheduling courses on the university databases
鈥?Conducting research for MBA program coordinator
Graduate Student Worker (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Edinboro University and Bowie State University Sodexho, USA
鈥?Assisted the general managers in planning and organizing various restaurants on campus
鈥?Provided strong team work and support to achieve the goals of the company
鈥?Ranked highly among the team for excellent service and strong sales

Intern May-August, 2005 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D.C.
鈥?Assisted the Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission (International Relations)
鈥?Verified official documents (passport, visa, naturalization, and legalization)
INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
Featured in the Bowie State University (HBCU) viewbook and website in 鈥淪potlight鈥?section, Fall 2007

Organized and hosted 鈥淲omen and Children in Japanese Society鈥?Speech and Dinner, the guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York, Fall 2005.

Assisted the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission and organized 鈥淎 Taste of Thailand鈥?Gala Dinner, a benefit for the post-tsunami support of schools and living facilities for the orphans in Thailand, Summer 2005.
Served as the Vice President of the Asia Club at Edinboro University, organized an educational trip to Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Spring 2004.
AWARDS
Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008
SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006
Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005
ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003
PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
鈥?Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008
鈥?Website Development Training September, 2007
鈥?OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007
鈥?Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007
SKILLS
Microsoft Office Applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Internet)
Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and Presenting Data)
Communication Skills (English and Thai)

References, Writing Samples, and Portfolios Available Upon Request

I agree it is too long. Under work experience you did a good job of starting each bullet with action verbs, but you've mixed past and present verbs
(example:
鈥anaging graduate students鈥?official files and documents
鈥ssisted the general managers in planning and organizing various restaurants on campus

Oh wait a minute you have two different jobs listed here ... you need to clean up the format. That whole section runs together as one.

Personally I think Objectives are dumb ... My objective is to get a job.

"Customer Service" Really??? A barista at Starbucks uses his/her "customer service skills to succeed in a competitive business environment". It seems like your skills and experiences are well beyond "customer service".

I might drop some of the international accomplishments or awards. Remember you can bring any of those up in your cover letter. "I have had many great opportunities to work with Asian dignitaries including was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York and the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission when I ..."

Of course if you are applying for a job in international banking or international non-profit I would say those things are important.

Good-luck

I agree with the other poster...it's a little too lengthy. As a former employer myself...he's right...too long and it gets tossed off to the side. I always scanned one first for key words that showed me that this person was a fit for the position I was hiring....then all those resumes would get a second more thorough look. Make your resume specific to the job you are trying to get :)
hope that helps

A little long but you have everything there. Give it time Hope. Looking for a job is a job within itself. Good luck

Sounds wonderful to me. I hope you get whatever job you are applying for!