Is this advertising header ok?? RIGHT IN THE CENTER......BUSINESS CENTER, THAT IS?

I live in Mexico City, obviously english isn't our native language.
I am creating a header for a Magazine advertising in the US.
The ad is about a Business Center on a Hotel and we want to convey that this hotel has a really great business center and that it is in the middle of the best business area in Mexico City. With play on words of course, to be a little creative. any suggestions?

Sorry this is not for a website header, but for the header or main message a person sees when you first look at an ad. I typed an extra question mark at the end of the "header" it has to be read like this:

RIGHT IN THE CENTER............
BUSINESS CENTER, THAT IS

Is that an ok statement??
Would you get the message??

Hi there,

How about...

YOUR BUSINESS IS OUR PLEASURE

LOCATED IN THE HEART OF MEXICO'S BEST BUSINESS PRECINCT, OUR FULLY-FUNCTIONAL BUSINESS CENTRE IS A WORK-A-HOLIC'S DREAM!

I recommend you have the magazine consult their marketing manager(s) to see what's effective. Being that the header of the website is the first part of a page seen I don't feel this is a question suitable for opinionated responses. I recommend looking at their target market and seeing what needs the magazine is meeting, then consulting the marketing manager. Go from there.

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