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Born: in Milan, Italy
EDUCATION
November 2005:
Degree in Business Administration - Marketing, obtained from l鈥橴niversit脿 di Milan Italy,
Degree thesis entitled 鈥淒ifferences of the redistribution between Europe and the United States鈥?
The study focuses on an analysis of welfare policies in Europe and in the United States, and their correlation with different social beliefs.
July 1998:
Diploma di Maturit脿 linguistica (54/60), High School .
WORK EXPERIENCE
May 鈥?August 2006:
Secretary at an accountant鈥檚 office in Milan
September 2001- January 2002:
Secretary at a notary鈥檚 office in Milan, drawing up notarial acts
March 2001:
Secretary at the International Training Center of the ILO (Milan).The main activity was: working with sales people for the marketing activities (documentations, brochures, etc.)
December 1999-January 2001:
Hired as secretary for Technical Department in an engineering industry. The main activities were: secretarial work, organising documents

So far I only see one mistake:"organising" ( it should be "organizing").

Born: in Milan, Italy
EDUCATION
November 2005:
Degree in Business Administration - Marketing, obtained from l鈥橴niversit脿 di Milan Italy,
Degree thesis entitled 鈥淒ifferences of the redistribution between Europe and the United States鈥?
The study focuses on an analysis of welfare policies in Europe and in the United States, and their correlation with different social beliefs.
July 1998:
Diploma di Maturit脿 linguistica (54/60), High School .
WORK EXPERIENCE
May 鈥?August 2006:
Secretary at an accountant鈥檚 office in Milan
September 2001- January 2002:
Secretary at a notary鈥檚 office in Milan, drawing up notarial acts
March 2001:
Secretary at the International Training Center of the ILO (Milan).The main activity was: working with sales people for the marketing activities (documentations, brochures, etc.)
December 1999-January 2001:
Hired as secretary for Technical Department in an engineering industry. The main activities were: secretarial work, organising documents

1- in a resume, readability is super important, so
make sure that the non verbal aspects of your Resume is
fine (things such as tabs, tables, capital letters, etc.

2-Born: in Milan, Italy
If this is for an american company, it is not necessary to have it, but if you have a reason for it, then that is fine.

3-EDUCATION
November 2005:
Degree in Business Administration - Marketing, obtained from l鈥橴niversit脿 di Milan Italy,
Degree thesis entitled 鈥淒ifferences of the redistribution between Europe and the United States鈥?


This does not clearly mention what kind of a degree it is:
a bachelor's? Master's? I would rephrase it as:
EDUCATION
November 2005:
Business Administration Degree (BS) - Marketing, l鈥橴niversit脿 di Milan Italy,
thesis: 鈥淒ifferences of the redistribution between Europe and the United States鈥?

Analysis of welfare policies in Europe and the United States, and their correlation with different social beliefs.


4-July 1998:
Diploma di Maturit脿 linguistica (54/60), High School Diploma .

5-Secretary, COMPANY NAME, accountant鈥檚 office, Milan

6-Secretary at a notary鈥檚 office in Milan, drawing up notarial acts
Same format at #5
Also, Notaries in US do not do as much as in Europe,
so perhaps you need to explain a bit more. Here,
for real estate deals, title companies do the job of Notaries
in Europe.


7-
Secretary, International Training Center of the ILO (Milan).
working with sales people for the marketing activities (documentations, brochures, etc.)

8-
secretary, Technical Department in an engineering industry.
COMPANY NAME, secretarial work, organising documents


good luck :)

l'Universit脿 is Italian! You have to translate it as well!

issued by the University of Milan

The previous answerer is right: bachelor's or masters's dregree? Is it a laurea triennale, biennale or quinquennale del vecchio ordinamento?

Please, remember paragraphing!

Engeneering company instead of industry (company=azienda, societ脿, stabilimento, la singola industria; ben diverso da industry=industria ma nel senso di settore!)

Use ' instead of ":
'Difference...States'
Analysis of welfare policies in Europe and the United States (no need for the second 'in')

Add 54/60 is the mark (final mark: 54/60). Explain what maturit脿 linguistica is, high school can be anything! You can call it 'language high school'.

My main task consisted in working with sales people for marketing activities.
My main task consisted in secretarial work and ??? documents.
???=drafting/drawing up if you mean stilare.
???=managing if you mean gestire (riordinare, ecc.).

No need for 'hired as', just say 'Secretary for tech...'.

My suggestion: se vuoi un consiglio, se 猫 la traduzione di quello che hai scritto nel cv in italiano, dovresti rifare il cv in italiano perch茅 cos矛 com'猫 non 猫 un granch茅.

In american English we spell 'ORGANIZING'
In the rest of the English speaking world we spell it 'ORGANISING'. But do not worry!!!

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