Offistart - Virtual Offices, Office Space, Business Support Services
*Home>>>Business Address

Business letter grammar?

Dear Fabio:
We are glad to hear back from you. We wondering there is no other company to contact with us from Brazil, but if any other company interesting about our products or want to know more information about v-link. We will lovely to cooperate the business for mutual benefit

By the way may I know your billing of FEDEX account number, shipping address and shipping name. I will be appreciate that for your providing thank you

Ok, this looks like you used a translation program off the Internet. VERY bad idea!

Dear Fabio,
We are glad to hear back from you. We were wondering why no other company has contacted us from Brazil, but we would be happy to cooperate with any company that is interested in our products or wants more information about V-Link.
In order to facilitate your order, please provide your FEDEX account number, shipping address and shipping name.
Thank you for your interest.
Sincerely,
Whoever you are

Sadly, this letter needs some work:

Dear Mr. Fabio:

We were glad to hear from you. No other Brazilian company has contacted us. We hope to reach more companies with information about v-link. We can assure them of mutual success. Contact information is at the bottom of this letter.

To facilitate shipping, would you provide your shipping address, shipping name, and Fedex account number? Thank you.

Sincerely, blah, blah, blah.

Contact information: _______

Tags
　　Temporary Offices 　　Shared Offices 　　Commercial Space 　　Office Space 　　Business Services 　　Business Address 　　Call Forwarding 　　Call Handling 　　Answering Service 　　Telephone Answering 　　Mail Forwarding 　　Virtual Address
Related information
  • How do I advertize my small home town business on the internet for free?

    Yahoo! Local will let you list your company for free. ...

  • Problems activating my work email address?

    Can't help you without more specifics. But more to the point, you need to work this out with your boss since he is the one creating the account for you. And you should not be broadcastin...

  • New LLC, how to account for $ spent before business bank account exists?

    your cost to start up the LLC are deducted as an expense on the corps federal tax return form 1065 as 'other expenses" (you'll have a statement showing other deductions that don�...

  • Business cards for marketing student?

    I think having a business card is a creative way to network, even for a student. Basics would be your name and contact information, phone, email, address, etc. For a title under your name, I woul...

  • My business has been open a year and I can not afford to pay myself a wage, should I keep going with it?

    From the sounds of it, sticking out may be your best option. Go over your books, and double check everything. Are you being overcharged for anything, are you recieving all inventory ordered. Mak...

  • Does a business have the legal right to give out personal information to anyone who asks?

    You could sue them for damages, but the likely hood of them having very much to pay you is slim to none. Change you phone numbers and report the harasser to the police.

    ...
  • Is there some sort of service that provides a temporary address?

    there is a po box. They dont redirect it though. There are also places like Mailboxes etc. that provide mailboxes for temporary use. The post office has tightened up the regulations on private boxe...

  • With your new system I have lost all of my business contacts and my E-mail addresses. What gives with your sys

    This is not the Yahoo office. This is just a forum with a bunch of chatters. If you are having a problem with a Yahoo product, you need to contact the Yahoo office. It is their product, and thu...

    • 　

    Categories--Copyright/IP Policy--Contact Webmaster