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We understand that this request should have been met several weeks ago. It鈥檚 only minutes ago the contractor eventually sends the information regarding the project site. We really apologize for this delay because the contractor has to check one by one in branch office concerning the information on the project site. We hope this information is beneficial for you.

Here is how it should read..... We understand this request should have been met several weeks age; however, the contractor sent the information regarding the project site just minutes ago. Unfortunately, the contractor has to check the information in each branch office one by one. We apologize for the delay and hope the information is beneficial to you.

Which one of the four sentences do you want us to check???

We understand that this request should have been met several weeks ago. It was only minutes ago the contractor sent us the information regarding the project site. We apologize for this delay, which happened because the contractor has had to check in the branch office, one by one, concerning the information on the project site. We hope this information is beneficial to you.

Not perfect, but better.

We understand.....ago. Only minutes ago, the contractor informed us about this project site....because the contractor needed to check the information regarding each project site individually, in the branch office....for you.

We understand that this request should have been met several weeks ago. It鈥檚 only a few minutes ago that the contractor sent the information regarding the project site. We really apologize for this delay because the contractor has to check the branch offices one by one for information on the project site. We hope this information is beneficial for you.

We understand that this request should have been dealt with several weeks ago. The contractor has only just sent information regarding the building site as he needed to check each branch office individually. This was a time-consuming process and we sincerely apologise for the delay. We hope the information is of benefit to you.

We understand and apologize for the lateness in meeting your request. We have only just received the contractor's information regarding this site. We must wait for the information to go through the proper channels and it will be forwarded to you at its earliest availability.

I revised this one for you.

We apologize that this requested job was not completed several weeks ago as planned. We have been patiently waiting for the information on the project site, which the contractor just sent to us. The contractor said he had to check the branch offices individually for this information. Again, we send our deepest apologies.

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